Those scars those scars
Shine like the stars
Only if you could see through them
You would know the story behind
Deep deep within those bitter sweet memories
Lies a dark secret and a good fortune
Which is inevitable.
She was depicted as glamorous
With holes and stiches,
Yet none could see
How she was acting, so guile.
Down to earth, a description of her
But a rotter she thought of herself.
Only if the world could see
How broken she is.
13 replies on “Broken wings”
This poem really highlights how media tends to romanticise pain and suffering without acknowledging the deep effects it has. Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much lovely ā„
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It was my pleasure!
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What a great post, it’s wonderfully composed. Those scars are what adds to her beauty.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate ā„
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You’re most welcome šš
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Beautiful. š¹š¹
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Thank you lovely
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Thank you for nominating me . I don’t know how to participate because I’m new to this . I need some help please
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Beautiful piece
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Thank you so much
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